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Maybe It's You. by ~sweetlilrocknroll:iconsweetlilrocknroll:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Ballad


When I was looking at someone else
You were staring right at me
I couldn’t believe it for a time
I didn’t understand how it could be

At first I thought it was flattering
But you’d move on soon enough
You would set your eyes on someone else
That’s when you called my bluff

I didn’t see this coming
Your feelings took me by surprise
I never would have expected it
Til the truth hit be between the eyes

You offered me everything
Promised happiness and more
It would be wrong to refuse a gift
Especially one left at my door

I had my eye on someone else
A fine man was he
Now you have my heart confused
And the future’s hard to see

You were completely honest
I have to admire you for that
This feels like a strange lottery
And my name’s been pulled from the hat

I’m still not sure what to do
So bear with me until then
And if it’s you my heart chooses
An invitation to you I’ll send
©2008-2009 ~sweetlilrocknroll
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Submitted: June 28, 2008
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well ok, I wrote this during a 10 minute conversation I had with =ATAPLATA and he said it was good and to put it on here lol so I did. Also helped me with the title =P

this obviously relates to my life right now lol, otherwise I wouldn\'t have written it, I won\'t go into detail, as this poem should technically speak for itself

enjoy ^_^
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~Snohawk:iconSnohawk: Jun 29, 2008, 6:16:28 AM
Very Nice Indeed.....So Wait...if this is true....then that mean reesors getting a boyfriend?.....shit people! get out Your Ice Picks! Hell Just Froze Over!

lol jk jk

but seriously though....very nice work!

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~sweetlilrocknroll:iconsweetlilrocknroll: Jun 29, 2008, 9:12:38 AM
LOOOOOOL I did't say that, but that was a good line, Chris, I gotta say =P

thanks

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Love is not old fashioned, but something that never goes out of style
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so call us freaks, but that's just the way we roll ~jb
~Snohawk:iconSnohawk: Jun 29, 2008, 9:35:18 AM
lol:P thanks..and your welcome!

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~sweetlilrocknroll:iconsweetlilrocknroll: Jun 29, 2008, 11:30:20 AM
never quit makin me laugh =P

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Love is not old fashioned, but something that never goes out of style
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so call us freaks, but that's just the way we roll ~jb
~Snohawk:iconSnohawk: Jun 29, 2008, 12:14:23 PM
nope....its my job:D

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~sweetlilrocknroll:iconsweetlilrocknroll: Jul 1, 2008, 5:40:49 AM
thanks so much!!! <333

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Love is not old fashioned, but something that never goes out of style
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so call us freaks, but that's just the way we roll ~jb
*brisni:iconbrisni: Jul 4, 2008, 3:59:08 PM
It does a wonderful job of speaking for itself.
well done.

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To understand love, you must experience love.
To understand God, you must experience God.

[God is love. Love is real.]
~sweetlilrocknroll:iconsweetlilrocknroll: Jul 6, 2008, 6:51:19 PM
I'm so glad, thank you!

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Love is not old fashioned, but something that never goes out of style
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so call us freaks, but that's just the way we roll ~jb
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